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  1. Jon

    Can you read and correct my essay, please? It’s for a college application?
    *Instruction: WRITE A 500 WORD ESSAY OUTLINING YOUR EDUCATIONAL AND CAREER GOALS AND THE REASONS FOR YOUR CHOICE OF THE DEGREE PROGRAMME.

    ESSAY:
    My life-long career goal is to become a physical therapist, someone capable of restoring, maintaining, and promoting overall fitness and health in accident victims and individuals with disabling conditions. Education is the key to my goal. I will attend the University of ****** and be educated. I will make my mind a sponge, soaking up every fact it encounters. In school and out of school, my ears, eyes and heart will be open to learn new things, and gather new facts. I will knit these facts and experiences into a final product: a tapestry of education. While my educational goal is aimed at studying to become a physical therapist, I would also like to express my passion for science (especially biology) and computers. In order to do so, I plan to, first, obtain a bachelor’s degree in biotechnology, and then enter and succeed in a refined physical therapy programme. I may even want to make use of my bachelor’s degree by working in a laboratory before studying towards obtaining a degree in physical therapy. I believe it would be a worthwhile experience and broaden my horizons so that I will not be limited to just one career. Each degree I earn will not only make me eligible for colleges or jobs, but will declare a set of knowledge gained.

    I chose biotechnology because it has made a great impact on medicine, the environment, edibles, clothing and agriculture. A biotechnology programme will allow me to utilize the sciences of biology, chemistry, physics, engineering computers and information technology.

    I have always found it interesting how humans have expanded their understanding of the biosphere by journeying into space and exploring the depths of the ocean, and not only have they been able to look at the surrounding universe and the depths below with the advancement of tools and techniques, but they also have been able to live there. Also, I have always found it interesting how beneficial microorganisms – which we cannot see with the naked eye – are, from controlling or curing certain diseases to producing foods and other products. These interests of mine are due to the application of biotechnology.

    I chose physical therapy because it is through that programme, I can be in a profession where I will not have to sit at the desk all day, and have the chance to make a meaningful difference in the lives of others. I like the fact that physical therapists get to interact with their patients one-on-one, helping them stretch and do a variety of therapy exercises, teaching them how to walk and use their bodies again, coping with a chronic disease such as multiple sclerosis, and reducing pain.

    Jobs are available to physical therapists in a variety of health-care settings, including hospitals, rehabilitation centers, home health care and private practices. Physical therapists are in demand as people are getting older and physical disabilities are increasing. Physical therapists earn a good salary. This will make it easy for me to get a job that pays well by the time I complete my studies.

    1. Mr. X

      My life-long career goal is to become a physical therapist, someone capable of restoring, maintaining, and promoting overall fitness and health in accident victims and individuals with disabling conditions. Education is the key to my goal. I will attend the University of ****** and be educated. I will make my mind a sponge, soaking up every fact it encounters. In school and out of school, my ears, eyes and heart will be open to learn new things, and gather new facts. I will knit these facts and experiences into a final product: a tapestry of education. While my educational goal is aimed at studying to become a physical therapist, I would also like to express my passion for science (especially biology) and computers. In order to do so, I plan to, first, obtain a bachelor’s degree in biotechnology, and then enter and succeed in a refined physical therapy program. I may even want to make use of my bachelor’s degree by working in a laboratory before studying towards obtaining a degree in physical therapy. I believe it would be a worthwhile experience and broaden my horizons so that I will not be limited to just one career. Each degree I earn will not only make me eligible for colleges or jobs, but will declare a set of knowledge gained.

      I chose biotechnology because it has made a great impact on medicine, the environment, edibles, clothing and agriculture. A biotechnology program will allow me to utilize the sciences of biology, chemistry, physics, engineering computers and information technology.

      I have always found it interesting how humans have expanded their understanding of the biosphere by journeying into space and exploring the depths of the ocean, and not only have they been able to look at the surrounding universe and the depths below with the advancement of tools and techniques, but they also have been able to live there. Also, I have always found it interesting how beneficial microorganisms – which we cannot see with the naked eye – are, from controlling or curing certain diseases to producing foods and other products. These interests of mine are due to the application of biotechnology.

      I chose physical therapy because it is through that programme, I can be in a profession where I will not have to sit at the desk all day, and have the chance to make a meaningful difference in the lives of others. I like the fact that physical therapists get to interact with their patients one-on-one, helping them stretch and do a variety of therapy exercises, teaching them how to walk and use their bodies again, coping with a chronic disease such as multiple sclerosis, and reducing pain.

      Jobs are available to physical therapists in a variety of health-care settings, including hospitals, rehabilitation centers, home health care and private practices. Physical therapists are in demand as people are getting older and physical disabilities are increasing. Physical therapists earn a good salary. This will make it easy for me to get a job that pays well by the time I complete my education.

  2. Inferno5757

    Help, I really need your help???
    Well, my mom just started a make-up course and she already has a new project: a biography on a celebrity make-up artist. She needed my help on it so I helped her. I just finished typing it up. But I have a problem both my mom and I don’t have a source to go to help for. I mean, we both aren’t very good when it comes to english grammer. So, if you’re kind enough please correct the grammatical errors, commas, run on sentences and just anything out of place. Please help me because I have no where else to go to get help for this. So here is the biography

    Kevyn Aucoin was a wonderful makeup artist who saw natural beauty in many and helped accentuate their features.
    He was born on February 14, 1962 in Shreveport, Louisiana at a Catholic Charities Home for un-wed mothers.
    His mother, Nelda Mae Sweat, was a scared pregnant sixteen-year-old with strict Baptist parents. His father, a handsome football player named Jerry Burch, didn’t believe that the baby was his.
    He was only a month old when he was adopted by an Aucoins family name. Kevyn grew up in a small town, Lafayette, with three other adopted brothers and sisters. At the age of eleven, he began making up his little sister Carla into a disco diva. While Carla was his source of inspiration, Barbara Streisand was his subject for painting and sketching.
    Kevyn realized he was gay at an early age. It was hard fitting in a small town like Lafayette. Kevyn instantly became a target for his classmates. He was tormented physically and verbally.
    At the age of 16, he moved out with his friend Glenn. Since neither of them had a job, they relied on their parents for food and other necessities.
    One night Kevyn and his friend Glenn met a drag queen. Kevyn became mesmerized by the power of makeup he had seen on this drag queen. Soon enough, Kevyn started inviting more drag queens over to his apartment to do their makeup. That September, Kevyn had to start junior high again. As soon as he began, the physical and verbal tormenting started again.
    Kevyn received death threats at school and he was beaten with rocks. One time two teenagers even tried to run him over with a truck. Finally, he dropped out of high school at the age 15. After he dropped out from high school he thought he would definitely fit in beauty school. 1978-1981. Kevyn asked his father for $900 to cover the tuition but Kevyn soon discovered that it turned out to be a waste of time and money because he knew way more than the teachers when it came down to makeup and hair both combined. Soon, he found a job behind a cosmetics counter at a local department store.
    Following Kevyn’s break up with his boyfriend Glenn, he moved to New York where he found work doing make-up for a porn magazine called Cheezy.
    Within a year, Kevyn was hired to work with Meg Tilly on a Vogue shoot. It was a milestone for Kevyn because he started working with models such as Cindy Crawford, Kate Moss, and celebrities including Tina Turner and Cher. Over the next couple of years, Kevyn did make-up for 18 covers of Vogue and 7 for Cosmopolitan.
    During the 1990s, Kevyn refused to promote products for Vincent Longo and Laura Mercier because he was only going to receive 5% of the profits. Instead, Kevyn launched a new line of beauty products, the Kevyn Aucoin collection, which he was going to launch on his own web site–keyvnaucoin.com.
    Kevyn’s make-up style truly defined the nineties. He brought out the beauty with classic touches. Kevyn had a unique vision that was completely transformational. He could completely “erase” someone’s features, and create a new face. He could glam up anyone, turn men into women, bring back faces from the past, and add shadow, texture, and features that were non-existent.
    Kevyn’s advertising work for Ultima was the result of “Naked”, a line he helped to design and he also had been hired to revamp for Shiseido.
    1994. Kevyn wrote three books: The Art of Make-up, Making Faces, and Face Forward.
    1995-1998. In 1995 the Council of Fashion Designers gave him the only award that they had ever given a make-up artist.
    In 1997, Making faces made it to number 1 on the New York Times best-seller-list.
    In 2001, he played himself in the film The Intern, he also played the part of a make-up artist in the film The Zoolander, (2001). Later on in 2001, he played himself in two episodes of the t.v. show The Sex and the City.
    October 2001, just a month before launching his own cosmetics line, Kevyn was diagnosed with a brain tumor. He died May 2002 due to kidney and liver failure.
    I already did. it shows no mistakes but ms word doesn’t show alll mistakes.

    1. Miss Joy

      Pretty good. Since this is for a make-up class it should be alright. You do need one more paragraph or at least a sentence at the end. A closing one, that summarizes the bio. – like-

      K. A. was more than just a make-up artist, and will continue to be remembered as a talented creative individual whose colorful lifestyle and exception imagination continue to leave their mark on the cosmetic industry even today.

      This will leave the reader with a positive feeling, not a creepy hospital death one, as well as remind them why they read the paper.

      Also, if using Microsoft word, before typing go to TOOLS on the top menu, hit Options, select the Spelling and Grammar File, hit Settings (underneath writing style) and then check and change things as needed. You can hit re-check document to do so.

  3. Redline rider

    Pleazz help me with PE?
    1.If you suffer from an injury, your doctor is likely to send you to
    A.an exercise physiologist.
    B.a physical therapist.
    C.a sports medicine clinic center.
    D.a personal trainer.

    2.A medical specialty with strong ties to fitness is
    A.radiology.
    B.neurology.
    C.orthopedics.
    D.podiatry.

    3.Athletic trainers work with
    A.high school athletes.
    B.college athletes.
    C.professional sports teams.
    D.All of the above

    4.When choosing someone to advise you about nutrition, consult a
    A.health food store clerk.
    B.orthopedist.
    C.registered dietitian.
    D.physician.

    5.Professionals who work under the supervision of a doctor to evaluate a person’s fitness are called
    A.physician assistants.
    B.exercise physiologists.
    C.sports medicine specialists.
    D.personal trainers.

    6.Guidelines that can help you to evaluate health and fitness claims include
    A.being suspicious of claims for quick and simple results.
    B.examining a writer’s credentials.
    C.being wary of mail-order sales or infomercials promoting products or services not endorsed by fitness professionals.
    D.All of the above

    7.Commercial gyms usually are
    A.small in size and have relatively few members.
    B.geared to the serious weight trainer.
    C.limited in exercise opportunities.
    D.All of the above

    8.Fitness centers available to employees and their families are called
    A.community recreational centers.
    B.commercial fitness centers.
    C.corporate fitness centers.
    D.family fitness centers.

    9.When choosing a fitness facility it is important to consider
    A.cost.
    B.location.
    C.operating hours.
    D.All of the above

    10.Instructors at fitness centers should be
    A.certified in CPR and first aid.
    B.at their optimum weight levels.
    C.good at aerobics.
    D.able to teach several activities.

    11.Exercise physiologists
    A.work with coaches to evaluate fitness levels of athletes.
    B.must be licensed by the state in which they work.
    C.must earn a college degree and be certified by a national organization.
    D.specialize in providing nutritional guidance.

    12.Fitness-related professionals
    A.are required to have a college degree in physical education.
    B.must be certified by a state board.
    C.are required to have clinical training.
    D.may have professional certification in their area of interest.

    13.To teach physical education, you must have a college degree and
    A.be certified by the state to teach.
    B.hold a professional license from the state fitness organization.
    C.have clinical training in wellness and personal fitness.
    D.All of the above

    14.Physical therapists primarily work with
    A.athletes.
    B.people who need to control their weight.
    C.people recovering from injuries.
    D.people with foot problems.

    15.When evaluating claims for fitness products, you should be suspicious of all of the following EXCEPT
    A.Claims of quick and simple results
    B.Miracle breakthroughs that have not been reported by reputable sources
    C.Mail-order sales and infomercials
    D.Authors of articles who have credentials

    16.Match each term with the corresponding description.
    1.Credentials
    2.Commercial dance studios
    3.Community recreational centers
    4.Athletic trainers
    5.Podiatrist
    6.Exercise physiologists
    7.Registered dieticians
    8.Physical therapists
    9.Orthopedics
    10.Commercial fitness centers

    A.Offer a variety of recreational activities and programs to community members
    B.Physician trained specifically to treat disorders of the feet
    C.Health professionals trained to work with people recovering from injuries
    D.Certified professionals who are specially trained to understand the body’s physical reactions to exercise
    E.Professionals who work with athletes undergoing rehabilitation
    F.Professionals who specialize in providing nutritional advice and helping people control their weight
    G.Offer a variety of dance and aerobic classes that develop cardiovascular fitness and flexibility
    H.Offer a wide variety of resistance and aerobic training equipment
    I.Branch of medicine that deals with bone and joint injuries and disorders
    J.A summary of a person’s professional training and experience in a given field

    1. Ester :)

      is this really hard for you?
      ok well anways here:
      B
      C
      D
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      number 16 u do it!

  4. amul

    Hello Frds, Please do favour and let me no if there is any vac’s across the world?
    Name:Amul Laxman Rathod
    Address:304/A Wing, Zeel Apts, Thakur Galli,
    Near Post Office, Bhayander (West)
    Dist: Thane

    E-mail id:rathodamul@yahoo.co.in

    Contact No:9833204406.
    Date of Birth:12-12-1981.

    Education & Qualification : S.S.C Passed from National Open School (1999) 42%
    : Hsc Passed from Delhi University (2001) 48%
    : B’com Passed from Delhi University (2005) 55%

    Present organization
    ADITYA BIRLA RETAIL INDIA LTD
    15th September 07 to till date
    Working as Stock Controller officer (Finance Dept)
    Providing input to DGM, GM & All Mumbai store Stock Controller on shrinkage.
    Doing Physical stock take at Store, Dc & Packing Center
     Auditing Finance amount at store level e.g (petty cash ,impress and diesel amount )
    Doing Positive and Negative Entry Adjustments.
    Making Reports of F & V Dump Reports on Monthly basis
    Conducting All Store s Frozen Stock Take on Weekly basis.
    Conducting All Stores Loose Staples Stock Take on Monthly basis.
    Conducting All Stores Consumable goods Stock Take Monthly basis.
    Responsible for Store Shrinkage while making report and doing stock take.
    Posting Stock count data in system
    Conduct training for the team & activities towards team building
    Conduct daily briefings for the team, Planning shifts & duties
    Handling 28 Stores & DC with the support of 12 members for stock take in Mumbai, Thane & Navi Mumbai

    HYPERCITY RETAIL INDIA PVT LTD (Raheja Group)
    27th March 06 – 30th August 07
    Team Leader &Product champ – Furniture

    I) Floor Operations
    Providing inputs to Manager SM/SOM/DGM on product sales, promotions, customer feedback etc
    Responsible for sales achievement of the dept. & Stock Management (Inventory)
    Ensuring that all ticketing and shelf takers are in place for customer convenience and information
    •Ensuring that customer service standards are adhered to by the CSR’s
    •Ensuring all customer feedback/requests is captured.
    •Ensuring VM of the store is as per prescribed guidelines & Plan-o-grams are strictly followed.
    •Ensuring that the hygiene and housekeeping is as per defined standards
    •Conduct training for the team & activities towards team building
    •Conduct daily briefings for the team, Planning shifts & duties

    II) Customer Service
    •To ensure all promotion /offer products are handed over to customer during schemes
    •Constant interaction with customer regarding their feedback and experiences
    •To ensure all customer queries & problems are promptly responded
    •Maintain excellent customer relationship.
    •Ensure all promotion should be updated on cash tills.

    III) Home Delivery
    •Handling home delivery for billed product for all over Mumbai.
    •Coordinating with warehouse at Bhiwandi and Malad DC for delivery of stock to customer.
    •Coordinating with transporters for delivery and collection.
    •Maintaining inbound and outbound logistic for home delivery.
    •Co-coordinating with company people for Assembly of furniture.
    Achievments

    Had been selected as a Service Associate in Hyper city.
    Have being achieved the Bronze Certificate in Hyper city.
    Promoted as a Team Leader of furniture section.
    After being TL I have been awarded with silver certificate
    Promoted as a Product champ.

    PANTLOON RETAIL INDIA LTD.
    1st November 04 to 26th March 06
    Worked for 16 Months
    Product Knowledge of apparels especially in ladies wear.

    Place: Mumbai
    Date:

    1. V.T.V.RAM

      Are you prepared to work in South India ?
      Is so, please contact me Via Yahoo answers .

  5. Inferno5757

    Can you proof read this please??
    Kevyn Aucoin was a wonderful makeup artist who saw natural beauty in many and helped accentuate their features.
    He was born on February 14, 1962 in Shreveport, Louisiana at a Catholic Charities Home for un-wed mothers.
    His mother, Nelda Mae Sweat, was a scared pregnant sixteen-year-old with strict Baptist parents. His father, a handsome football player named Jerry Burch, didn’t believe that the baby was his.
    He was only a month old when he was adopted by an Aucoins family name. Kevyn grew up in a small town, Lafayette, with three other adopted brothers and sisters. At the age of eleven, he began making up his little sister Carla into a disco diva. While Carla was his source of inspiration, Barbara Streisand was his subject for painting and sketching.
    Kevyn realized he was gay at an early age. It was hard fitting in a small town like Lafayette. Kevyn instantly became a target for his classmates. He was tormented physically and verbally.
    At the age of 16, he moved out with his friend Glenn. Since neither of them had a job, they relied on their parents for food and other necessities.
    One night Kevyn and his friend Glenn met a drag queen. Kevyn became mesmerized by the power of makeup he had seen on this drag queen. Soon enough, Kevyn started inviting more drag queens over to his apartment to do their makeup. That September, Kevyn had to start junior high again. As soon as he began, the physical and verbal tormenting started again.
    Kevyn received death threats at school and he was beaten with rocks. One time two teenagers even tried to run him over with a truck. Finally, he dropped out of high school at the age 15. After he dropped out from high school he thought he would definitely fit in beauty school. 1978-1981. Kevyn asked his father for $900 to cover the tuition but Kevyn soon discovered that it turned out to be a waste of time and money because he knew way more than the teachers when it came down to makeup and hair both combined. Soon, he found a job behind a cosmetics counter at a local department store.
    Following Kevyn’s break up with his boyfriend Glenn, he moved to New York where he found work doing make-up for a porn magazine called Cheezy.
    Within a year, Kevyn was hired to work with Meg Tilly on a Vogue shoot. It was a milestone for Kevyn because he started working with models such as Cindy Crawford, Kate Moss, and celebrities including Tina Turner and Cher. Over the next couple of years, Kevyn did make-up for 18 covers of Vogue and 7 for Cosmopolitan.
    During the 1990s, Kevyn refused to promote products for Vincent Longo and Laura Mercier because he was only going to receive 5% of the profits. Instead, Kevyn launched a new line of beauty products, the Kevyn Aucoin collection, which he was going to launch on his own web site–keyvnaucoin.com.
    Kevyn’s make-up style truly defined the nineties. He brought out the beauty with classic touches. Kevyn had a unique vision that was completely transformational. He could completely “erase” someone’s features, and create a new face. He could glam up anyone, turn men into women, bring back faces from the past, and add shadow, texture, and features that were non-existent.
    Kevyn’s advertising work for Ultima was the result of “Naked”, a line he helped to design and he also had been hired to revamp for Shiseido.
    1994. Kevyn wrote three books: The Art of Make-up, Making Faces, and Face Forward.
    1995-1998. In 1995 the Council of Fashion Designers gave him the only award that they had ever given a make-up artist.
    In 1997, Making faces made it to number 1 on the New York Times best-seller-list.
    In 2001, he played himself in the film The Intern, he also played the part of a make-up artist in the film The Zoolander, (2001). Later on in 2001, he played himself in two episodes of the t.v. show The Sex and the City.
    October 2001, just a month before launching his own cosmetics line, Kevyn was diagnosed with a brain tumor. He died May 2002 due to kidney and liver failure

    1. biking for life

      umm noo I have beer to drink this looks really really long and boring and I haven’t had to do homework in about 11 years I didn’t want to then and I don’t want to now.

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